What is done/What not to do:
Artists from all around are on display today at the Alliville art festival — painters, sculptors, and new media artists comes to this place to barter, showcase and ultimately, reach to others using this powerful medium. But one artist is a…
Very nice :)
Although the “bad” and “good” last paragraphs need to be switched, or the “good” paragraph needs to be completely rewritten.
Her parents are coming across as paranoid and responding to questions that haven’t been asked.
Yeah, that’s my fault for not portraying it correctly. I had it in my head but just didn’t write it down because how do I words? Question was intended to be, “When asked about the success of being an autistic artist…..” but I didn’t edit it due to the massive explosion of vegan-related posts that immediately followed.
Aside from that, do you have any other reasons why these should be switched?
If the intention was to state that people shouldn’t distinguish Autistic artists from Non-Autistic artists, then no :)

